Post-16 Feedback Form
Focus:
29.12.13
Research
and Planning (14/20 = Level 3)
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Strengths:
1.
Good time
management skills.
2.
Some evidence
of drafting both your digipak and your magazine advertisement.
3.
You have used
different camera shots and angles when making a mock of your digipak.
4.
You have
researched both digipak and magazine advertisements and replicated the
digipak to show the conventions of form.
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Areas for improvement:
1.
Ensure all
tasks are uploaded as you cannot leave a level 2 whilst it is incomplete.
Your whole magazine advertisement is missing.
2.
A wider range
of ICT programmes could have been used.
3.
Some grammar
skills need editing and improving to ensure you sound professional and formal.
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Resulting Actions (student response):
I am going to upload any work that hasn’t
been put on and also add more to do with my music magazine. I am also going
to use different ranges of ict such as maybe facebook and twitter. Lastly I
will check all my grammar mistakes and spelling.
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Focus:
29.12.13
Print
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Strengths:
1.
Some evidence
of cropping and re-sizing when planning.
2.
Your
mise-en-scene is appropriate to both the task and your genre.
3.
You have
integrated your text into your image on the digipak.
4.
You have used
Photoshop to edit your images.
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Areas for improvement:
1.
Explore shot
distances and their impact on your target audience.
2.
More font
research, particularly size, would be useful before completing your final
product.
3.
Your images
haven’t been manipulated or edited in full.
4.
You have not
included all conventions of form but you have a lot of them.
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Resulting Actions (student response):
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